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Sexual Harassment Sucksby *mainasha

Cartoons & Comics / Traditional Media / Cartoons / Drawings

This guy at my job harassed me for like 2 months I will give you more of the story later on how I got him to stop.

Critique by *vmcampos May 29, 2009, 2:55:29 PM

Great linework. I like how there is a time progression in such a short time. It's a great sequence that doesn't need to be broken up by the standard comic panels. Excellent expressions and very clean drawings. The characters are super cute!
As for critiques; I had a hard time following the speech balloons. If you read from left to right (as is common in English-speaking countries), I found myself reading the "answer" to the "question" first. I think it's stronger in "panel" three (let me look at your leg), that the creep is speaking first, and then the lady reacting second. If in the first two panels the same situation happened, the text would flow better, I think.
In short, great job, and I'm glad things have improved.

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*GavinMichelli May 29, 2009 Professional Digital Artist

Nobody ever has any love for the bald chicks...

*raccoon-eyes May 29, 2009

Its nice to see you drawing again arie.

~mrcontroversial May 29, 2009 Professional Digital Artist

Hopefully he'll cut it out before you have to report the incident. There has to be a level of respect, especially at work. On the positive note, love the poses and facial expressions in the different scenarios. They do get the point across that the male character is not only annoying, but also rude by his actions. And the last panel is gold!

*SukiMitchell May 29, 2009 Hobbyist General Artist

omgosh.....that's horrible...yet it make for good reading in comic form...
Hey , if he does it again, i have cousins who can take care of it.....^.^.....lol

=morganagod May 29, 2009 Professional Digital Artist

that sucks on two levels. First, that you had to deal with it. Second, that attitude has probably worked for that guy on occasion.

~silentlily May 29, 2009

That sucks. I had that at Target one year and it's quite tiring. I ended up taking it to upper management after two weeks. And he was mad at ME for ratting him out O_O;;...