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Submitted: May 29, 2009
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Sexual Harassment Sucksby *mainasha

Cartoons & Comics / Traditional Media / Cartoons / Drawings

This guy at my job harassed me for like 2 months I will give you more of the story later on how I got him to stop.

Critique by *vmcampos May 29, 2009, 2:55:29 PM

Great linework. I like how there is a time progression in such a short time. It's a great sequence that doesn't need to be broken up by the standard comic panels. Excellent expressions and very clean drawings. The characters are super cute!
As for critiques; I had a hard time following the speech balloons. If you read from left to right (as is common in English-speaking countries), I found myself reading the "answer" to the "question" first. I think it's stronger in "panel" three (let me look at your leg), that the creep is speaking first, and then the lady reacting second. If in the first two panels the same situation happened, the text would flow better, I think.
In short, great job, and I'm glad things have improved.

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